Hello again everyone, it's time for another reader feedback post.
First I'll let everyone know that I haven't yet decided what my next story will be. I am considering finishing the Reunited story soon, but I'm not sure that will be the next thing I write. I do promise that I will conclude that story eventually though.
I'd also like to announce that I am heavily considering doing less of my traditional celebrity stories and doing more stuff like the Reunited series where the story is about fictional characters who are based on celebrities. As much as I enjoy writing my usual stuff I am starting to feel like I might be getting burnt-out on the regular "celebrities hook-up with each other" scenario.
I think doing much more fictionalized stories will reinvigorate my creative process and allow me to more consistently write quality stories. Also I have gotten requests in the past to write about subject matter that wouldn't fit my regular stories; for example I've gotten requests for things like "mind-control", which I would be open to doing, but simply wouldn't fit in my regular stories about celebrity guys hooking-up with each other. I'm considering branching out into more erotic fantasy/horror/sci-fi/superhero/etc. type stuff.
Now I'd also like to ask my readers a question; what is it you enjoy about my stories? I'd like you all to let me know in the comments and please be as specific as possible. Let me know what aspects of my stories you enjoy the most. What part of them is it that turns you on and makes you want to read more? Knowing what it is about my stories that makes people want to read them will greatly help me when planning future stories and keep the overall quality of my work good.
So please let me know what you think in the comments and feel free to ask any questions if you have them. Bye for now readers.
If you feel you're doing a better job at fictionnal stories with celebs-based characters, i'm all in for that, reunited is one of your best work and i can picture cavill and haynes just fine !
ReplyDeleteSo really, you can do more original stories i'll jerk off to them all the same :)
Thanks, I'm glad to hear you like the Reunited story so much. I'd like to do more incest stories and I think I'll look more more celeb guys who look like they could be related.
DeleteI like the usual celebrities-hooking-up stories. It was what first attracted me to you writing and they are my favourite stories to date. I feel like theres something about using their names that really allows me to explore my personal fantasies and imagine these erotic scenarios
ReplyDeleteThank you. I still plan on doing my usual celebrity hooking-up stories, just maybe not as often. I'll probably do more stuff like The Adventures In The Dungeon series with different celeb guys.
DeleteI like it when you get kinky and explore bondage and stuff. I also love it when people go full ahego and get super slutty and horny
ReplyDeleteThanks. I've been told that people really enjoy my kinkier stories.
DeleteI've always been a fan of everything you write.
ReplyDeleteIt's the way you describe things that really gets me going. It helps me visualize the actions between the guys.
The celebs themselves are great choices, but it's how you describe what they're doing to each other that makes it super hot to me.
I would love if you added Bob Morley or Brandon Rough to your lists.
I find both of these guys incredibly attractive and would love to read about them both if your muse inspires you at some point.
Regards.
Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it. I try to be as descriptive as possible in my writing so I'm glad to hear you enjoy that.
DeleteSorry, but I don't have any interest in those guys. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories though.
Just normal celebrity hook-ups are good but I think your work with certain stories are much better. I enjoyed Reunited (still waiting for the chapter 3) and the last one with Hugh Jackman, Zac Efron and Taron Egerton was very great! Hope to see more like that.
ReplyDeleteThank you. People really enjoyed the dynamics between the characters in that story with Hugh, Taron and Zac.
DeleteI'm all for erotic sci-fi/superhero/etc stories. I think those can get really creative and as a result really kinky and hot ;)
ReplyDeleteI've always liked how you give each celeb a personality. So often I read smut in which two celebs are doing the hottest stuff with each other, but they're stripped of their personality and as a result it's just like any other porn on the internet. Your celebs are always really fun and interesting. I like how you portray there personality in what they say, but also in how they fuck. It makes things much sexier in my opinion. (I especially LOVED Pratt (+ his relationship with Hemsworth and Evans))
I'd also like to say that you should write the things YOU want to write. If you feel burned out on a certain genre, feel free to try something different! Of course we all like to see our fave celeb, but it's your writing. So you do you. After all, we came here for your style and skill :)
Ps: would you ever do a story about cum? I have this really kinky weird fantasy of Pratt having a medical condition so once a month he gets really horny and he needs to cum often and a lot. Like LOADS of cum. And so every month he invites Hemsworth and Evans to 'help him'. They don't mind, they love it actually. No pressure to write this! Just something I wanted to tell you
Thank you so much for this detailed response, I love hearing this kind of in-depth feedback from my readers.
DeleteI'm so glad you enjoy the personalities I write the celebrities with, highlighting their different personalities and how they have sex with each other is always a lot of fun and I agree it makes the stories sexier.
You're right that I should focus on what I want to write because even though I want to please as many of my readers as possible and I do enjoy taking your suggestions and ideas into consideration, at times it does feel a bit constricting when I feel like I need to fulfill someone else's expectations for the story.
Your story idea is interesting, although that does sound like a scenario that would be better used in a sci-fi or other type of more fictional story than my usual celebrity stories.
You’re so hot, I would love to have a conversation with you. You are so good with words and I’m so good with my mouth. Email me breakfree1723@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteI'm a big fan and I've read everyone of your stories. I like them because they're somewhat plausible.
ReplyDeleteYour choices of celebrities is great although there are plenty that you can add who are less known or less followed that the stories could happen to them like: Josh Duhamel, gerard butler...
Or if you like the fantasy angle how about time Travel old actors and new like Marlo Brando and Hugh jackman doing a flip flop that would kill..
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy my stories so much. In my more fictional stories the characters are based on actor's appearances so it is possible that I could base some characters on actors from the past, if I choose to.
DeleteFictional Matt bomer as someones sex pet would be cute amd kinky. Joe mangellio was his collage room mate if that sparks anything?
ReplyDeleteI might keep Matt Bomer in mind when considering future stories.
DeleteHonestly, I love all your stories but the ones containing incest are the best. :D Plus I have a huge rape fantasy fetish and I'm into watersports. And those are all things I've seen a couple times in your stories. I'd love to see more of that, especially more rape fantasy. ;) I love it and it is even better because all the celebrities you write about are my fave men I get so horny from.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I love doing stories about incest. Incest is one of my favourite kinks and I do enjoy doing rape stories as well. I hope you enjoy the Reunited series since it includes both.
DeleteI'll definitely be including more incest and rape in my future stories, especially the more fictional ones that will allow me to be more creative.
I love your one on one stories and the hook ups, but I'll be down to read more fictional stories. I mean I am down. For unprotected sex that might lead to male pregnancy and mind control. It would be I retesting to see Hugh Jackman (for example) breeding Tom Holland and getting him pregnant. Or Chris Evans use mind control so that pine gives him a BJ. But I would also like some continuation with the hook ups, I fell like we need to se Zac Efron and taron Egerton in bed. And an ending with the dark Phoenix cast un a sex orgy.
ReplyDeleteBut it's all up to you
Thanks. I'll probably do some male pregnancy stuff in some of my more fictionalized stories.
DeleteI'll probably still be doing more regular hook-up stories but I'm done with the X-Men cast stuff.
I am down for anything but I really need to read Jason Momoa rape the shit of a spread out in pain Tom Holland.
ReplyDeleteThat will probably be something I save for like a fantasy story. I know a lot of people want that scene.
DeleteA remake of game of thrones, like Gay of thrones, where Jason rapes not denerys but Tom. YES! Yes!
DeleteIf you do fantasies would you do AU's like: Hugh Jackman is tarzan and fucks all the twinks AU? Chris pratt is a sex adict, like in a same AU?
ReplyDeleteTOm holland is a human test for sex experiments?
I think my regular celebrity hook-up stories will be one separate continuity and then the fictional stuff like Reunited will be another AU and the fantasy/sci-fi/horror type stuff will be one-shots but some might be connected or even form their own separate continuity if I want.
DeleteHey Seth! Do whatever you want. If you are happy we are happy
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, I appreciate that. I am going to focus on what I want to write more often and I trust that people will still enjoy reading my stories.
DeleteLet's see if I understand the hook ups still exists, but there be more fictional stories. But we will still get sexual interactions from Michael F, Ben A,Chris P and the rest?
ReplyDeleteYes. I will still do my regular hook-up stories, but maybe not as often. I'll still be writing about the guys I usually like to write about and I'll be looking for new guys too.
DeleteWill you even do a nick Robinson with Josh Duhamel?(without fisting)
ReplyDeletePossibly. I did recently make a gif story about those two on my newTumbl if you're interested.
DeleteWill you ever do a cloab? I mean you know some writers, there is one on AO3 that posts your work for you but still writes and you also know other writers from Tumblr and newtumbl
ReplyDeleteI have thought about the possibility of doing a collaboration, but I'm not sure.
DeleteThe main thing is that I would make sure that the quality of the other person's writing meets my standards but I'd be afraid that if I collaborated with one of my friends but not another one, then the other person would be offended. I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings or make them feel like their writing isn't good enough.
So for the time being I think I won't be doing any collaborations.
Yes! I wanted fantasy sex all along. I mean I wasn't going to suggest that Hugh Jackman has a horse penis instead of a normal one and fucks two is with it making them pregnant...but if it comes I am happy...lol. I am actually dying for read it but I'll behave.
ReplyDeleteYou can also recreate some sexy kinky stuff in a gay way like game of thrones or a gay version of meet Joe black. And instead of rad Pitt fucking that woman fucking a man/twink or recast the life out of it.
Endless possibilities
You do you!
I'm glad you're interested in me doing fantasy stories. I have thought about doing my own pornographic parody stories of certain movies, we'll see how it goes. You're right that there are endless possibilities.
DeleteYes! Yes! That's what we need!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you're excited for it.
DeleteSeth, the true is, whatever you write - i will love it! Yours stories are the most beautiful stories and they are fulfill my filthiest fantasies! Kepp it up man!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I hope you continue to enjoy my work and have fun with all my erotic fantasies.
DeleteWhat are you going to write next?
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure. It might be the finale to the Reunited story.
DeleteCould we get Henry Cavill fucking his brother (reunited) but in a way that he is disgusted yet loves fucking his brother with his huge cock again maybe a kind of rape because it would be hot. I love the reunited story. Maybe Jon Hamm is the boys dad and they have a thresome.
ReplyDeleteWhatever I want to read that shit now, whatever it is
That's an interesting idea. I don't plan on including their father in the story though.
DeleteWould you do crossovers like James Marsden character from Westworld fucking Tom Holland from Spiderman?
ReplyDeleteI don't think that pairing would fit, but I might do stories with fictional characters from movies and tv.
DeleteDoes this mena that retired characters from Hook Ups will make some kind of comeback but in fantasy? I hope so
ReplyDeleteYes, that's very possible. It all depends on what I feel inspired to write.
DeleteHi, I'm Brazilian and a fan of your stories
ReplyDeletei'm particularly top and love it when your stories refer to men with big butts like chris evans and henry cavill (especially him), i like your stories the way they are, but if this change will make you more comfortable to create them, go ahead, surprise us!
hehe thanks and good luck!
Thank you, I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.
DeleteBack when Tumblr was amazing, I came across a story of yours involving Tyler Hoechlin. He is my all time favourite male celebrity crush, so I had to read it. The one that stood out for me the most was "Chris Evans and some Super Ass". I surprisingly enjoyed it even with Tyler being (SPOILER ALERT) humiliated and more ..
ReplyDeleteIf you're into a mix of lots of sex scenes between many different male celebrities, read the super hero, dungeon and Halloween orgies. These will be fantastic for you. Including that many men is smart because you reach a wide range of different readers, for everyone is something or in this case someone.
One of my first favourite stories of yours is "The Greatest Cocksman" and afterwards "Fucking Rampage". The part between Zac Efron and Dwayne Johnson kept me hard and leaking precum. The key to a great story involves characters with a clear purpose, an event or more that keeps you interested and in this case a fetish of mine. And you combine those elements amazingly, writing it in a story. You continue to amaze me with plot twists as well, having stereotypical dominant muscular men being bottoms and younger, cute twinks being tops. Also important to have that surprise factor which you often bring to the table.
I mentioned Hugh earlier which brings me to the next stories. "Making Daddy Happy" and "Don't wake Daddy". If you're into super sweet, romantic love making with a dark twist, then this is ideal for you. I love to romanticise a lot and let it involve passion with pure sex. You did all of that by using your words carefully and your vocabulary is eloquent. What makes it even better is how you're able to combine a considerable love story with a twisted and kinky ending.
The more twisted and kinky stories continue and I found that in "Hemsworth x3". For someone who doesn't really enjoy sex between relatives, I was able to read your story and still enjoy it because it is pure fantasy. You write in a way, where the reader can imagine him or herself in the story which makes it relatable. The more I read your stories, the more growth I discover when it comes to taking it to the extreme involving taboo elements. You reach out to a more daring and explicit kind of audience which is positive.
This leads me to "Reunited". This was hardcore, extreme and kinky. As a story, it's amazingly written. The story itself is definitely not for everyone. It involves sex between relatives and brutal and violent sex. There is an art in writing dangerous and thrilling stories without turning off the reader and you did that by providing the right adjectives and adverbs, making the story enjoyable to read and wanting to continue.
As for the future, keep discovering and experimenting with all writing styles, prompts, characters and more you can play with. Keep being true to yourself and never forget to enjoy yourself while you're writing. That on itself is a great accomplishment of being an amazing writer, that you are.
Thank you so much for this in-depth response, I really appreciate it.
DeleteIt makes me so happy to know that people enjoy my stories on so many different levels. I started writing erotic stories online as a way of sharing my fantasies with other people and hoping they would enjoy them as much as I do and it's amazing to know that not only do other people get turned on by them they also open-up to new fantasies as well.
I'm so glad that people enjoy how much effort I've put in to improving my writing skills and storytelling ability, and appreciate the different kinds of fantasies I've incorporated into my work.
Thank you again for this amazing response.
Seth honestly I love your stories for multiple reasons, the reason just depends on the story. All the celebrity hook ups are super hot. The multipart series are always super hot, wish you had continued The Celebrity Challenge. Maybe you can reboot that but have it be something like Marvel movies VS DC TV/ Movies (lets be honest Grant Gustin is the better Flash and Steven Amell is hot).Horny Halloween is also my favorite cause you depict Ryan Reynolds as a sex addict so perfectly and the last one had a bit of mystery to it I felt. Maybe if you wanna branch off into fiction, have it be Jason Voorhees(Friday the 13th) or Michael Myers(Halloween) are chasing a bunch of alpha male jock celebrities but instead of trying to kill them they try to fuck them into submission instead. Something else I've actually wanted to see you write is the celebs meeting their characters like Ryan Reynolds meeting Deadpool or Chris Pratt having a three way with himself, Star Lord, and Owen Grady. Heck Tom Holland meeting both his version and Andrew Garfields version of Spider Man would be hot. Question have you seen The Rocky Horror Picture Show and do you think Brad and Rocky is a pairing that should be explored more than it already is which is basically not at all.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I appreciate your feedback.
DeleteI don't have any plans to reboot The Celebrity Challenge but I will still do other multi-part series. I have been considering doing something new for Halloween this year but I won't give away anything yet. I've seen The Rocky Horror Picture Show but I wasn't really attracted to any of the characters, sorry.
I don't think I'd be into doing stories where actors meet the characters they play but something where characters played by the same actor meet have and have sex is something I'd be open to.
I really wonder why so many of your readers want you to include rape in your stories? It is such a high demand and I don't get it? Not to bad mouth your readers or criticise your choice of stories. To each their own kink. I'm just really interested in what makes those stories so loved and popular by so many of your audience. Also what drives you to write in that genre?
ReplyDeleteSpeaking for myself I find rape fantasies to be very sexy and for a lot of people it's a very taboo fantasy. The idea of the power dynamics in a rape fantasy is very appealing to people I think.
DeleteI can't say I'm crazy about rape in stories myself, but I'd prefer people get their kicks out with either writing or enjoying fiction rather than actually doing it if it's something like that.
DeleteMatt Bomer in a thong! And being a slut!
ReplyDeleteI love your stories (and the hot stuff you post on NewTumbl) mainly because it's just the rare male/male eroticism presented unapologetically. Frankly, I love that you have two (or more) attractive men hook up just because they want to. The way you write the lead up and then describe them having sex is in the moment and super hot.
ReplyDeleteAs for what I'd like to see, maybe famous gay couples (maybe real ones, maybe for fictionalizing, say that Henry Cavill and Chris Evans married for example) doing a swing with another couple or bringing a boy toy home to share.
Have you thought about using more male models in your stories? I loved the one with Pietro Boselli. I'm a thirsty Instagram followers of models like him, David Ortega, Janis Danner, Juan Betancourt and Alex Crockford myself.
Hard left, but are you into doing body transformations at all? I dig them, but it's hard to find crossover where someone gets changed into another shape, it's male/male, and then it gets erotic. Like a guy has a hookup with an amazing top, so he decides to keep him for himself by squashing him into the shape of a dildo (which is still fully sentient) and popping him into his ass whenever he wants. It's a stretch as to if that'd be something you're up for, but doesn't hurt to ask.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy my stories and my newTumbl blog. I do really enjoy portraying unapologetic male/male eroticism and lust. I'm glad you find my approach to writing sex scenes hot.
DeleteYour idea for famous gay couples is interesting, it's definitely something I'll consider for my more fictional stories.
I did really enjoy the story I wrote about Pietro Boselli and Todd Sanfield and I've considered writing other stories about them or other models. I'm not very familiar with the models you listed but I've seen Alex Crockford before and he's hot.
Personally I don't think I'm be into body transformations very much. But I definitely plan on getting a lot more creative with my fictional stories.
Thank you again for your feedback.
Seth i love your stories for multiple reasons. I don't know how you doing that but with every story you write you fulfill my obscene and filthiest fantasies.
ReplyDeleteI don't think i can tell which story I like the most - each one has something unique in it. Each story is precious. I like reunited story, adventures in the dungeon and also christmas celebration.
Have you thought about writing Chris Evans or Hemsworth use like a slut - pisssing, brutal fucking, spitting etc. Or maybe a orgy where other male actors and stars use them like a slut.
Also - have you thought about story where Tom Holland can lick armpits of Henry Cavill? Do you have plans to write stories about Richard Madden or Kit harrington?
Thanks!
Hi, thank you for your feedback. I'm happy to hear my stories fulfill your fantasies.
DeleteI don't usually fantasize about Evans or Hemsworth as sluts. Tom Holland licking Henry Cavill's armpits sounds pretty hot though. I'm not into Kit Harrington, sorry.
As for Richard Madden it's very likely that I'll be writing about him in the future now that he's joining the MCU and there's a rumour that he'll be playing the first gay superhero in the MCU. We'll have to wait and see.
Seth, do you have plans to write some fic about Stuart Reardon? Oh God, daddy Stuart merciless fucking some twink. That would be so hot!
ReplyDeleteIt's possible. Stuart Reardon is insanely hot so I would definitely be open to writing about him.
DeleteI agree with Anonymous comment -Stuart mercilessly pounding some twink...or Rurik Gislason maybe.
DeleteSeth such a great work you do... keep it up man!Those stories are priceless!Thank You :)
This might be a new one for you, but maybe sometime you could try a reader's POV story where the reader is a call boy who gets hired to take care of a horny celeb?
ReplyDeleteI haven't really considered that. I don't have much interest in reader POV stories.
DeleteAny chance you're a fan of Tennis? A hot threesome between hairy Roger Federer, big butted Nadal and lean Djokovic would be hot AF. HUGE FAN of your's. Can't wait to see what you write next.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the compliments. I do like tennis but I rarely watch it. I'm not really into Federer or Nadal. Nadal has a nice ass but that's it. Djokovic is very sexy, I wouldn't be opposed to writing about him at all...
DeletePlease make Jason Momoa fuck Tom Holland in a game of throne setting. Rape him make him cry claim him as his
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